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[Lyric in Kanji/Kana]
ねぇ この世界で産まれ落ちて 何の為に生きるの?
もう 運命ならば受け入れよう どんな明日が訪れるとも

(Groan of pain) 心が裂ける無差別な傷 痛みは深い爪痕残し
(Key word) いつかの君が忘れた痛みが 彷徨う心出口を隠してる
忘れない

繰り返し流れる涙 過ちを刻むTATTOO
明日を生きる誓い込めて 刻み込む静かな愛のTATTOO

(Blind hold) 見えないふりをしてた そんな現実が
明日を歪め君を独りにする
(Glow up) こんな日常じゃ退屈すぎるだろ?
目隠しを外して覚悟を決めたんだ
Glow up tomorrow

許されぬ過ちに無き 疼き出す赤いTATTOO
明日はきっと笑えます様に濡れた頬 静かな愛とTATTOO
まだ君は痛みますか?

Everlasting これが君の優しさで憎しみさ
Everlasting この痛みが眠りにつくその日まで

(Groan of pain) 誰もが目を塞いでいた真実がはっきりと顔を出した
(Groan of pain) 他人事の様に嘲笑う奴らが急にそれを欲しがるんだ
(Groan of pain) 傷つきたくない傷つけたくないみんな自分が大切で
(Groan of pain) 自分を守るんだ

繰り返し流れる涙 過ちを刻むTATTOO
明日を生きる誓い込めて 刻み込む静かな愛を

もしも君が迷う時には 伝えたいこの言葉
明日がきっと笑えます様に 明日がずっと笑えます様に

I don't forget this pain all the time.

[English Translation]
Hey  being born in this world  what is it that you live for?
Soon if fate is accepted  what kind of tomorrow would surely visit

(Groan of pain) the heart is torn; a wound without discrimination  the pain leaves behind a deep scar
(Key word) the pain that was forgotten by you in time  hides in the exit of the wandering heart
It cannot be forgotten

The tears that repeatedly fall;  the TATTOO engraved by errors
Do the oath of living for tomorrow like always  the TATTOO of silent love that is thoroughly engraved

(Blind hold) While pretending that it cannot be seen  that kind of reality  you single-handedly distorted tomorrow
(Glow up) Then, this kind of everyday passes by full of boredom, don’t you agree?  You prepared yourself to take off the blindfold
(Glow up tomorrow)

There are no mistakes which are not permitted;  the red TATTOO begins to throb
Silent love and TATTOO would surely make wet cheeks be able to smile tomorrow
Are you still hurting?

Everlasting  this is your kindness and your hatred
Everlasting  this pain fell asleep until that day

(Groan of pain) Everybody’s eyes were closed; the truth was plainly written on their faces
(Groan of pain) Those who ridicule someone else’s problems will suddenly feel like they wish for it
(Groan of pain) I don’t want to get hurt, I don’t want to get hurt; for everyone, oneself is important
(Groan of pain) Protect yourself

The tears that repeatedly fall;  the TATTOO engraved by errors
Do the oath of living for tomorrow like always   for the silent love that is engraved

If the time comes should you lose your way  I want to tell you these words
So that you will surely be able to laugh tomorrow  so that you will always be able to laugh tomorrow

I don’t forget this pain all the time

12012 - Tattoo
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Rendered in Daz Studio 3 Advanced. Postwork done in Photoshop.
Stockimage by *ELENADUDINA
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Made this one in DAZ Studio 3. because my DAZ Studio 4 stucks while rendering and add little squares in my render ;_;
The Rendersettings are the same as in DAZ Studio 4 but it doesn't look so good. I'm sorry. I'll try to uninstall my D|S 4 and install it again maybe it works, as long I need to work with D|S 3. At the first I wanted to make it with Poser but the pythonscript for the Tattoo will not work *sighs~

I hope you like it.

EDIT:
Made a new version, with using UE Light. The Textures of the Clothes were changed too, and her Skin. Her Tattoos are now looking better, after edit the Skintexture in PS CS5.
Thank you *jamminwolfie for our critique.
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*jamminwolfie Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Am not sure where these little red points is, but if you want a critique on how to fix this image for quality, I can help with what I see.

I love your set up, girl's appearance, and the background, very nice idea :)

...wolfie
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=MiyuLin-Art Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I forgot to delete it in the description, in this version they arent the points.
I always love to get critique :3

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it
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*jamminwolfie Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Absolutely welcome, friend! Here's the critique... I seriously doubt you have UberEnvironment light up, as there's no occlusion shading which makes your image look more natural (shading/shadows around the edges of things close to another, such as the hand on her chest). I would load it. There are no apparent shadows, or you used Shadow Map for shadowing and used too many lights that voided the shadows and made this image "bland". I would delete all lights except 1 main one and face it to her from the back (thus the moon light on the background image) and set the shadows on raytraced, with shadow softness at 10. Since this should be a dark scene (your character is too bright for this scene), I would set the UberEnvironment light's color grey or darker blue, and set the main light intensity low. For Maximum Trace Distance (setting at the bottom of the UE light), I have a little lesson here [link] For the character, there's a surface setting suggestion on that lesson as well.

The tattoos... unfortunately there are too many vendors who are dishing out these very fake, painted on tattoos and honestly to me they're aweful lol. I would open the textures in an art program, load the "non tattoo" texture as well, and blend the two some to make the tattoos look at least a little more natural.

Other then that, I really like the theme you have here :)

Hope that helps, friend! :)
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=MiyuLin-Art Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :hug:

I'll try it with the tattoos.
Yes I didn't used UE, usually I use it. I've a version with the UE Light and going to render it.
Thank you for the Tutorial, I'll have a look at it.
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*jamminwolfie Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Absolutely welcome, friend, good luck :) Anytime you need help or have a question, feel free to holler! :)
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~NinjaTeddiesGalore Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :D

I'm listening to the song now. He has a nice voice ;D
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=MiyuLin-Art Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much.

It's my favourite band :3
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~NinjaTeddiesGalore Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
They're pretty cool but I don't understand a word they were saying. >,<
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!J-Century Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey Shion, bump of her skin looks like...a little weird?
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=MiyuLin-Art Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, I'm working on it :)
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